We were describing our favourite body part.
We had to use adjectives so we planned using a bubble map.
Aadesh used his bubble map to describe his hair.
I am going to tell you about my hair.
My hair is short and it tickles me when I go for a haircut. It is black like space where astronauts go to see and discover. If I didn't have hair I would be bald and I would have a sunburnt head.
I love my short black hair!
By Aadesh
Jaime used a bubble map to describe her legs.
My legs are so alive!
They are so tough! Shhh they're also very very quiet. They are so veiny and very wriggly. My legs are a bit droopy and so strong they can zoom past you. They are straight and so smooth. Oh they are long and very important. Yes yes very warm.
I love my legs. Without them I won't be able to run!
By Jaime
1 comment:
Bella says awesome stories you guys.
Aaron says I think Aadesh is good at writing.
Jack says awesome writing.
Alice says I wrote about my heart.
Saim says everyone isn Super 16 is superb writer.
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