Lemons

  On   Friday  last   week   Mr  Durkin  brought   some  lemons   as   a   surprise   for   the   class. Everyone    had    different   thoughts     about   them.  Some    people    thought   they   were   delicious   and   some   people  thought  they  was  gross. He  brought  them   for    story   writing. When   we    first  saw  them   every   one   was     very    loud. 
Mr    Durkin     gave     everyone   a   lemon     but   we   weren't   allowed    to   eat   them. We  were    alowed    to   smell   them    and   listen    to   them[which   was  bbbooorrriiinnnggg   because   they   don't   make    a   sound.] Then    finely we  got   to    eat   them  . The   first   time   I    tasted  it   I   wished   I   hadn't   but   after  a    while   I   got   used   to  it but some   people   didn't.
We   had the experience  so   we   would  have    a   good   vision    of    our    time   eating   lemons. 
It   worked   every   one   wrote    perfect   stories that captured how we felt.
By Lily