That's So Unfair By Brooke

I only had little sip of my mum's friend's drink 
because she didn't get me any juice. I was very thirsty.

I got told off.
That's so unfair!

I only got a book and my brother got a cd.
 That's so unfair!


I only get one swimming lesson.
 Thats so 
unfair.


I only had some of my sister's lolly because she wouldn't share with me! She told on me.
 That's so unfair!


I only had little lick of my big sister's ice cream cause
I didnt  get one and it was melting.
 That's so unfair!


I only sipped my dad's coffee.
 He said go to your room 
That's so unfair


I only sipped my mum's tea.
She told me off .
That's so unfair!

Well done Brooke.

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