Tuesday, March 6, 2012

That's So Unfair By Bella

I only had to go to bed early.
My brother gets to go to bed later than me.
 Its so unfair .   
                                                                                                                                        I only had a little drink of her juice I got told off after she noticed That so unfair. 
                                                                    
I only ate my brother's lollipop then he hit me. 
That's so unfair.   
                                                                                                    
  When my friend came over she said I cheated.
 My mum said don't cheat.
She told me off even though I said I didn't do it.
 That's so unfair!



Well done Bella-Rose.
Superb writers write sentences their readers can understand. 

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